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Wednesday 6 January 2016

An Untold Story - Midpoint feedback

How well has the illustrator made sense of their field trip?

"Impressive documentation with drawings, good use of media."

Comment on the use of drawing as a research tool

"really nice drawings focusing on the colour of the stalls"

Comment on the use of secondary research as a research tool

"historical research using the internet and books about leeds have been very useful for you in terms of finding out about the history of the research"

What will be your next steps?

"You need to find a narrative to focus on, maybe speak to people at the market to some ideas.

Can you identify any issues with this research? is it too complex? vague?

"Documentation is great but you do need to find a narrative"

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